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Red XIII / Sarah for XCrimsonwolf asdfghjkl by Legrandzilla Red XIII / Sarah for XCrimsonwolf asdfghjkl by Legrandzilla
Here is a portrait I did for my lovely friend :iconxcrimsonwolf:, or the Sarah of which you all wonder who she is.;) I was going to hold this portrait for ransom, you know, to get my stuff, but... I am too much of a softy when it comes to Sarah, cuz, you know, her being like, awesome, like she is.
Anyway, this is her in a gender bender of Red XIII or Nanaki from Final Fantasy.
Her hair is really blue on the ends too! But she is cuter than this for reals yo. I am just doing meh art thang...yo.^^
Anyhoo, hope you like it my dear friend! Yo.
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Long awaited critique from me! :D
Firstly I would like to say how remarkably close this is to the reference picture, and that I am only being harsh cause I know you can do better than this!

Firstly the eye... this bothers me a little, it looks extremely cartoony, there is no variation from the iris into the colour as there should be in a realistic eye, like this, see the little strands within the eye almost likke eye colour veins? : [link] There are also dark areas around the coloured part of the eye too, I can see you have attempted this here but you might need a little more definition there just to make that eye POP!
The eye socket on our right is great, but I feel you need a little more shadow just behind the nose to get that perspective down.. but I cannot be sure on this because I am not 100% sure where the light source is. Which brings me onto my next point, you need to get some of those awesome shadows and highlights in here yo! you have all your midtones I can see, but this image looke a little flat to me. some shines on the cheeks depending on your light source, and other places too like the hair needs more highlighting/shadowing to really convince me where that light is coming from.
Again, I am going to chastise you on the amount of black used here, see the shadow in the crook of her neck? thats perfect Jon, keep using those browns and reds and purples and any other colour that might take your fancy, colour is your friend! And you need to play with your friends no? Experiment ! :D look at colour wheels to help you, and maybe research colour theoru a little more, I recently did and it has helped me a lot!
I already said about the writing looking a little flat, and it looks odd as it does not follow the general angle or curvature of the arm.. sort of looke like her arm is .. flat, you could improve this by adding some highlights but remember next time think of your angles!
Those beads are great so far, but like i said there are no highlights! you have your shadow area and your midtone, but you need to follow that through with highlights...

With all that said please know I still love this piece, and I am very critical here but like I said Jon, I believe in you!
Hope I helped you a little! Enjoy! :D :heart:
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Team-RazorBlade Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Im so jealous how you draw girls~<333

Its just so perfect~
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Legrandzilla Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!
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Team-RazorBlade Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Sure thing~XDD
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xCrimsonWolf Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
WHAT THE HECK, I was just looking for this and it wasn't in my favorites! D:< WHY DO YOU HATE ME, dA! I still have yet to critique this! I suck >.<
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Legrandzilla Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I just noticed that this has 127 downloads!!
Are they all you downloading?
Orrr....is it that all the downloads are BECAUSE of you??
What is it about you that peoples always up and downloading yo face?
Well, now you know it isnt me doing it! I dont have to download my own, yo!
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xCrimsonWolf Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
238 downloads know O___O I feel like I'm being download violated. I wish I was cool enough to download my own face that many times... I think I'd creep myself out though o_o
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Legrandzilla Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL, you would be all :iconloveeyesplz::icondragondizzy: on yourself!  Heh, the question is, is it my awesome art, or you, they are downloading?  hmmm....
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xCrimsonWolf Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Then I'd report self stalking to the police and get put into crazy town! :D But no, it's DEFINITELY awesome Jon art. Wayyyyy cooler than my face. Trust me. I KNOW.  Believe it or not. I've seen my face before. So I have personal experience in know how much cooler your art is than it!
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Legrandzilla Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have seen your face too, and I know what I am talking about, and you just crazy gurl!  But thanks for talking nice about my art.  I dont pay much attention to downloads, it would be interesting to see if this one has more than my other portraits?
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Legrandzilla Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
thou sucketh not
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